Wednesday, March 9, 2011

Charmer

You feel beautiful,
don’t you?
With your head held high,
watching me.

You sway,
in a trance;
held fast by the sleek notes
of the soft piping lute.
They glaze your skin
like oil over dark water.

Everyday I lure you out to the street.
The crowd slips around you
to watch me;
to see how I can control you.

You are charmed.

You can’t stop your movements
because you are afraid.
Afraid that I will hurt you,
or worse,
that I will leave you.

But I will never escape this basket,
I have no legs.



I felt like writing poetry last night and I came up with this. I'm still unsure about the ending, and I'm not sure if it makes sense "as is". I'm hoping it turns out like that spinning dancer optical illusion where you look at it once and she's going clockwise, and then you blink and she's going counter clockwise... 

2 comments:

  1. Wow, I seriously had to read this about... six times before I realized this was about a snake and a snake charmer! (and that's a awesome thing on your part!!) It's a perfect metaphor for so many things! It first reminded me of the "so watch where you step when you dance with yourself." Do I have that paper? If I do, I need to find it and give you the poem!! (especially since it's mostly your genius!) :)

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  2. oh! I'm so glad you were able to understand it. And I totally forgot about that poem; I wonder if it's in my contemporary lit. folder...

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